Um, why are you taking the jumps out of the dynamic day? Also, taking out the posterior chain movement is a mistake in my opinion.
You've basically turned it into a second max effort lower body day. I know it's the best, most fun day of the week, but it needs to be kept to once a week.
By the way, if you want to bring up your vertical jump, you need to JUMP, and what you've done here is moving you away from your goals, not toward them. Again, in my opinion.