Short Poem with Meaning

[quote]Brown_Lifter wrote:
I’m the Hiphopotamus,
My lyrics are bottomless…

Yea[/quote]

I’m Gangster, I’m very mad
Don’t mess with me
'Cuz my rhymes are bad

[quote]Mutu wrote:
Just bring up the rear delts a little[/quote]

Hahaha I just sprayed gatorade out of my nose

So-called T-men have no patience for poetry.
Reading it makes their nads shrink… or so they fear.

Well, keep trying I guess. Some people here say this isn’t the greatest place to show your poetry, but… .I think it is. It’s perfect. The improper arena.

So because you did, I will too.

Impossible Trees

I don’t know what your eyes see
Am I holding up two fingers or three
As I’m …giving all the gold away for free
just a slight glance back perhaps to yesterday
when you carved your name upon my streets of clay

Could I … walk along your shady pier
Could I …stir these dirty waters clear
When you cant even look me in the face
A shadow disappeared without a trace

I don’t know what your heart takes
Nightfalls, High noons, or Daybreaks
Do you ever feel when the earth shakes
just a slight avalanche of distant sound
when this voice called out to you right through the ground

Could I …wind up your talking dinosaur
Could I…knock again upon your oak door
When you wont even peer just through the cracks
Tied up and left again on these train tracks

Well I dont know what your dreams say
Or if you shiver much for doomsday
Honey I still don’t know your birthday
But I still climb your impossible trees
Just to end up at the bottom with bleeding knees
And what do I say again…
I say please


I have sinced learned the birthday, remember, remember the 5th of November.

Hmmm, last time I wrote a poem was for a girl asking her to be my Valentine. Cheesy huh? She thought it was cute. But before that it was like 8th grade…

Anyways, heres an even shorter poem with even more meaning: the title is Fleas.

Fleas

Adam
had’em

(You could rename the poem to anything: AIDS, muscular dystrophy, a penis, etc.)

[quote]Vicomte wrote:

Walt Whitman would be madly in love with the idea of bad poetry on the internet. He would also enjoy the homoerotic undertones of this website.

I am certain of this.[/quote]

Me too.

[quote]CodyJay wrote:
Only to know
I know the step I must take
I’ve got to follow what i know
I look for ways to change.
But only to know
I change from the start
I know what I have to do
I’ve got to finish what I started

What do you think about this poem?? Rate it?[/quote]

You’ve got a long way before you move from “Shit” to “Suck”.

Keep your day job.