A poem that I wrote after a break up... I'm laughing at it now because in retrospect everything seems rather silly but I think it captures that emotion quite well. Any fans of poetry? Critique it? I'd rather not have the "your a homo" comment but I know it will come and that's ok too lol.
Memories melt and collude as brain cells decay
and in the lost abiss, time dismissed and feelings went astray
And in that moment, singular time, we slipped to pure dismay
you and i, as we collide - fire to melt away my fears
but as it dies our fuel supplies burn into carcinogenesis lies;
romance dies and drowns away, submerging in my tears today
yet sentiments of of your return keep me with my ears - to the phone.
bedside my bed waiting for your call - to no avail.
i tried texting and calling, but you never got the voicemail.
And i don't think reconciliation is within reach -
you left me here, tears on cheeks, knees on concrete
but my heart seems to have sunkin into an abyss
peering out the darkness for a chance at your kiss
if i find, it i'm taking it - call me a theif
but if its within reach, i don't think i can stomach defeat.
No walmart 150 fine detriment, no hidden door meetings
this is my honest call for help, but ignore me;
i want you for yourself.
YEA SON! THAT'S HOW ULTRA MASCULINE I AM! I CAN WRITE SOME SHIT LIKE THAT AND STILL BE FUCKING HARD AS BEDROCK!(mandatory posturing over)
Anyway, any real men out there that enjoy writing I would love to hear some poetry as well.