Looks like you're hitting all the key lifts.
I think you have the sets/reps inverted. Typically, it's standard to write (sets)x(reps), so you wrote 8 sets of 3 with 8x3, but I think you meant 3x8.
Anyway, in a given week are you doing each of these workouts twice then? I think it'd be good to put together 4 different workouts, sticking with your exact template, but doing different upper/lower workouts on your last two training days of the week. Like:
Monday: Upper A
Tues: Lower B
Thurs: Upper C
Fri: Lower D
That way you don't have to lump shoulders into your leg workout. They really should be a part of your upper days, while deadlifts should be part of lower day. With a focus on strength and performance, deadlifts are a lower body lift. If you start flirting with bodybuilding templates, then we can talk about doing deadlifts on back day, but I don't think that's where your head is.