Hack Wilson wrote:
As with anything of the artistic nature, if it means something to you then cool…who gives a fuck if it’s not proper prose? If it doesn’t mean anything to someone then who cares too? Unless you meant for your work to have a universally applicable message then I don’t see the point of someone lecturing you about the stylization of the piece.
Later man, keep writting if you like it…but I’d say that there’s probably forums on the 'net more likely to be receptive.
My motive for posting it here was to see if anyone liked it. I know my friends would never give an honest answer. And art/poetry forums judge things based on correct form.
Obviously I was hoping someone would like it, but honest answers is what I was going for and got them.
Yeah. It really sucks. Sucks bad. Really bad. Incoherent. Stupid. Bad. You are not a poet. I love the written word, except I guess, when it’s written by you. But I find poetry to be pretty stupid. Most times, unless it’s very, very, VERY well done, it seems very childish. Your seems more infantile, though.
Do you have a personal problem with the OP?
A wicked sense of inferiority?
Or just a generally malicious personality coupled with a total lack of tact?[/quote]
I feel inferior, I guess. I feel small. Insignificant. Help me?