I think this is turning into a training log. You might consider posting in that venue. I don't give a rip, but some of the forum nerds might....
Just a personal offering, I'd like to see a more deliberate and even violent change in direction vs the bar. I think you're going to get to a weight you can clean and have a pretty steep learning curve for the jerk.
Donny Shankle offers some pretty lively commentary about both the pull of a clean and the jerk... If you have the time.