2nd rep was better.
First you didn't keep so close to you, look at where you make contact with the bar on the first compared to the 2nd rep. Keep it closer to you, so be more patient and delay the 1st pull.
Looks pretty tidy overall imo.
Do the bar work progressions. Get some recordings of how fast you are with a bar.
Your speed down to receive the Snatch isn't bad at all. Work on this.
Keep it up. One of the better self taught guys imo.
Hips are fine imo.
Shoulders are a bit behind the bar, keep them over a tiny bit more.