I think it looks quite good neutral back position, high hips, tight at the starting position. I am not sure you have an idea back angle You getting close too bending too far over IMO. Perhaps more experienced people will comment too.
Is there a reason you are pulling in weightlifting shoes?
Thanks, I have made some adjustments since the time I took this video. I am sitting back more and trying to get a flat back more
yeah because my gym doesn't allow barefoot and those are the only flat sole shoes I have
They have flat soles, but they also have a raised heel, which is what you want to avoid here. You might consider a cheap pair of chuck taylors or a similar knock off.