What does this mean? What was your progress?
What does this mean? Current height, weight, and general fat level? Current bests on the squat, deadlift, row, bench, overhead press, and pull-ups/pulldown?
What does this mean? "Hypertrophy" isn't a goal, it's a process. "I want to weigh 190 with defined abs" is a goal. "I want to squat 315x10" is a goal.
Even without knowing your actual stats, I'm comfortable saying you don't need to stress out about training your traps or rear delts enough. Train everything with a good plan, eat plenty, and you'll be on track.
The general approach you laid out is solid (upper-lower split with different set/rep schemes), but I disagree with some redundant exercises and with doing "hypertrophy" work on the "power" days.
Clay Hyght's Blending Size and Strength is a much better version of what you were trying to put together.