im definately not an expert, but it looks like your using your arms to much, when i clean i jerk the weight of the floor and then drop my ass as low as possible to get under it and catch it, i hardly use my arms at all.
That’s because you’re doing a squat clean and he is doing a POWER clean.
To the OP - I’d say it looks solid but I would work on not locking the knees so soon. Go to this site and watch the videos over and over and then compare your videos to there’s. Really good start.
Wow, that is an awesome site! I’m getting a little sick of the techno though.