I’m a beginner myself and its a bit hard to see with the video being sideways so I might not be the best person to give advice so here it goes…
It looks to me like you start with the bar a little too far forward. The bar path should be a straight line up and always above your mid foot. It looked like you pulled the bar back a little as you were lifting it off the floor. As you being to lift, you should feel the bar touch your shins.
Also I think you need to lift your chest more. I was watching Rippetoes videos on dead lifting and he was saying to lift your chest, straighten your arms, and before you lift pull the bar back with your lats and if you don’t feel it a bit in your chest then you are doing it wrong.
As I said I’m still a beginner too, so advanced lifters on here please don’t rip me a new one on this post [/quote]
I dont really know i tried rippetoes advice and i didnt like it my form was even worse than this.
Well as I said I’m a beginner too, so I’m sure there will be others on here with more to say, although now that I see the video upright its more obvious that your bar path isn’t completely straight on every rep which is most likely due to a bad starting position.