hey, i was pleasantly surprised - they look really good to me!
agree with andy about really getting those elbows up fast.
i find it hard to finish the pull properly when i'm capable of powercleaning the weight without getting under it at all - but practicing the full lift. you might find it is self-correcting (that you think things look better when the weight gets to more than you can powerclean). but it might be about really whipping those elbows up faster, too.
i've seen people practice from the hang position. hang - drop. getting used to not pulling the bar as high as you can but rather pulling the bar high enough. getting the elbows up lightening fast. then simply trying to maintain all that at heavier weights. looking pretty good though, i reckon (though take that with however many grains of salt you need since i'm pretty crap myself).
bar path looks pretty good to me, anyway. and i'm totally obsessed with that.